Thesis and Outline

Thesis:
In order to receive donations, Darfur is Dying and Deliver The nets both effectively educate players by showing their struggles of Daily life, the people in the games need support, and allowing you to help children and families.

Outline:

Intro: thesis and argument
-argument: The main goal of the game is to receive donations.
Paragraph 1: Contrast: Describe Darfur is Dying (DD) and Deliver the Nets (DN)
-Both use arrow keys to move
-DD: 2 rounds (forage for water and camp)
-DN: 1 round (deliver nets until nightfall)
-cartoon
-DD: Choose character
Paragraph 2: Compare: Educational games
-the people in these third word countries need help and here is how...
-learn about genocide
-give statistics about where the money goes
Paragraph 3: Compare: Persuasive games
-seeking donations and how the donations help
Paragraph 4: Compare:
-Pathos: show small children and families needing help
Paragraph 5: Rhetorical Analysis:
-Purpose: to seek donations and educate those who do not know what is happening
-Audience: philanthropic people and people who care about what is happening in the world
Paragraph 6: Compare: Effectiveness
-Both games made me feel sorry for the characters within the game and is a very good way to seek donations.
Closing